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Deviousness `ChewedKandi has certainly gone out of her way to keep the vector community on the right path. Always making sure that her talents are infinitely scalable, Sharon has put her bezier curves to excellent use, and firmly anchored herself as an inspirational leader. We're absolutely delighted to bestow the Deviousness Award for June 2013 to `ChewedKandi. Congratulations, Sharon! Read More
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It's a pleasure to look both - from the distance and in full view.
in the distant view we can admire how nice the position of every street is. We get the feeling that the map is 3-dimensional. Every house seem convex, the same as city wall , trees and Dju-Hoki Temple, that thanks to your amazing shading feels like the highest building in the city. There are even some animals on fields and ships on the river.
When we take a close look we admire all the details. We can see not only textures on roofs, streets and city wall, but we also see that every higher building throws long shadows on other buildings, there are some ponds in the park, every tree is lightened were it should be and trees behind buildings are darker. I like that you added names of the most important buildings. It truly must have be very difficult and time consuming and involved lots of your work.
I know that you copied and rotated houses and it already took lots of effort, but I wish you hadn't make buildings differ a little bit. For example houses by the river in G5 square. They are next to each other an look exactly the same, maybe if the chimneys were in different places or had a little bit different colour it would be better.
Also little part of city wall in D1 doesn't have any texture on.
Personally I would like it better if it looked less digital more fantasy, especially the river feels very digital and artificial to me, but this is a very personal opinion, so don't worry about it at all.
Generally I like the piece very much, I think it will look wonderful as a poster on the wall! I appreciate the effort you made to create this wonderful work of art and the impressive shading that made it look 3-dimensional. You did a great job.
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